【雅思寫作｜分數範文】Task 2 6 分範文・接受困境還是改善（1/3）：Both views 題型判斷、分數卡與英文原文

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In the contemporary society, there are two views regarding encountering adversities. Considerable public debates surround on whether the merits of accepting a bad situation outnumber the demerits. As for my perception, the negatives of accepting poorer situation surpass the positives, and the reasons behind my perspective will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

An array of factors may contribute to why accepting a bad situation seems rather disadvantageous. First and foremost, it is readily apparent that the life after choosing the poorer situation will be easier because of lower competitiveness. For example, since fewer workers want to compete for those occupations with fewer salary, people who choose those jobs may not need to face comparisons and competitions with others. Secondly, people who choose those bad situations sometimes have more leisure time, providing feasible schedule to individuals. In other words, those who is poorer or work for unsatisfactory job usually do not have tight working shifts; therefore, the feasible timetable grants them opportunities to conduct others things or develop different habits.

On the other hand, as far as I am concerned, if a person chooses to improve such situations, they may have better quality of life or various choices on workplace. Primarily, after successfully improving the situations, there is no denying that those individuals can have better jobs with higher compensation, which makes their life better and easier. To put in other words, owing to the fact that the quality of life sometimes results from better financial condition, people can have a happier life if they decide to improve and make the condition better. Furthermore, improving those poor situations can further increase one’s professionals, which offers a wide range of advanced opportunities in the workplace. International cooperation, which hire workers only with competent capabilities, are a good example of this matter. When workers improve the situations by enhancing their professional knowledge as well as improving their language abilities, it is easier for them to get an offer from international companies and frims.

In conclusion, based on the aforementioned, I firmly believe that it is wise of people to improve the situations rather than accepting them, since improving those situations can provide easier and better opportunities, along with various choices toward finding jobs, which undeniably make our life better.