【雅思寫作|寫作語言】Task 2 主題單字(上)(2/3):環境與教育的核心詞彙、論點與主題句

雅思寫作主題單字(上)第 2 篇封面:環境與教育
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這篇筆記: 整理環境題(物種滅絕、全球暖化、交通與進口食物)和教育題(實用技能、學科選擇與大學)的核心詞彙、我作文裡的原句、正反論點與可套用的主題句。

Task 2 主題單字(上)|共 3 篇

  1. 1. 整理方法與科技題
  2. 2. 環境題與教育題(你正在讀)
  3. 3. 工作題、背法與練習
環境與教育主題的核心單字與可用論點:物種滅絕、生物多樣性、碳足跡、大眾運輸;實用技能、學術科目、學校課程、開闊視野
這篇的兩個主題:環境與教育,各四個核心單字和一組論點

三、環境:物種滅絕、全球暖化、交通與進口食物

環境題我寫過「物種滅絕是不是最重要的環境問題」、「提高油價能不能解決交通與汙染」、「該不該限制搭飛機」,以及從科學、進口食物延伸出的環境論點。環境題的單字比較專門,但只要背熟一組,很多題都能共用。

核心詞彙表

英文中文常用搭配我作文裡的句子
extinction of species物種滅絕pose a threat to human lifethe extinction of species poses a threat to human life(Task 3)
pollination授粉be responsible for pollinationBees, which are responsible for pollination, are good examples of this matter(Task 3)
biodiversity / diversity of species生物多樣性decrease significantly、hinder sustained developmentthe diversity of species will decrease significantly if the extinction keeps happening, hindering sustained development
habitat棲息地adequate habitats、the habitat is shrinkingthe habitat of polar bears has been decreasing dramatically as a result of the upward trend of the ocean’s temperature
global warming全球暖化rising sea levels、extreme climate、the greenhouse effectA wide range of unpleasant consequences, such as rising sea levels, extreme climate, and the greenhouse effect will happen
greenhouse gases / carbon dioxide溫室氣體/二氧化碳be released into the atmospheregreenhouse gases like carbon dioxide will be released into the atmosphere(訂正後)
carbon footprint碳足跡have a larger carbon footprintthe carbon footprint of imported foods is larger and makes those foods environmentally unfriendly
daily necessities生活必需品threaten daily necessitiespollution … threatens a wide range of daily necessities including food, land, water, and air(Task 3)
fuel consumption燃料消耗excessive fuel consumptionTraveling by airplanes may cause pollution or fuel consumption
public transportation / alternatives大眾運輸/替代方案improve the public transportation systemworkers will choose to go to work by bus or MRT when public transportation is available and cheaper
renewable energy再生能源sustainable、replace fossil fuels(筆記想點)renewable energy is sustainable, but removing traditional energy may cause unemployment

可用論點

可套用的主題句+例子

主題句:Other environmental problems deserve more attention because [問題] poses a direct threat to people’s lives.

我實際寫的段落(Task 3):Primarily, global warming is so imperative that should not be ignored, since it definitely poses a threat to people’s lives. A wide range of unpleasant consequences, such as rising sea levels, extreme climate, and the greenhouse effect will happen because of global warming.

這段的內容很好,但第一句有兩個問題:so … that 後面少了主詞 it,而且 imperative 不適合形容「問題很嚴重」。改成 global warming is so serious that it should not be ignored 就好。這篇 Task Response 拿到 8,但 Coherence 只有 6,我的分析是段落裡的論點列得很完整,但段落之間、句子之間的推進比較像條列,缺少「因為 A,所以 B,進一步造成 C」的連結。

四、教育:實用技能、學科選擇與大學

教育題是我寫最多的主題之一:學校該不該教實用技能(正反各寫一篇)、大學生該不該修主修以外的科目、政府經費該不該只給理科、團隊運動是不是學合作的最好方法、為什麼越來越多人想讀大學。

核心詞彙表

英文中文常用搭配我作文裡的句子
practical skills / real-world skills實用技能learn practical skills along with academic subjectspractical skills grant schoolchildren opportunities to pick up some indispensable capabilities
academic subjects學術科目concentrate on academic subjectsdepriving them of concentrating on academic subjects
school curriculum(複數 curricula)學校課程be included in the school curriculumI support the inclusion of practical skills in the school curriculum
schoolchildren / pupils學童—real-world skills distract schoolchildren from their academic studies
proficiency in精通require proficiency inAn array of jobs like teachers, salespeople, and lawyers undeniably require proficiency in speaking in public
be allocated to被分配到limited school time should be allocated to…limited school time should be allocated to studying professional knowledge
qualification / certificate學歷資格/證照study for a qualification、academic qualificationsqualifications are always the strongest evidence when finding jobs(Task 4)
broaden one’s horizons開闊視野—which can definitely broaden their horizons and help them decide their career paths
spark / find new interests激發新興趣—they can spark new interests in students
foster competent professionals培養專業人才(我常寫成 competent professions,要改成 professionals)learning academic subjects fosters competent professions(建議改 professionals)
team spirit / cooperation團隊精神/合作learn cooperation through team sportsthose who have a lower interest in sports may be ignored, leading to unfairness
physical differences體型差異prevent children from taking part in team sportsphysical differences may prevent children from actively taking part in team sports

可用論點

可套用的主題句+例子

主題句:The main reason why I think schoolchildren should learn practical skills is that these skills are so useful that they may provide a wide range of career choices.

我實際寫的例子(Task 12,練習 45):The ability to give a public speech, which requires communication and organization skills, is a good example of this matter. An array of jobs like teachers, salespeople, and lawyers undeniably require proficiency in speaking in public.

「X, which requires…, is a good example of this matter」是我那段時間最常用的舉例句型。它的好處是可以把「例子」和「例子為什麼相關」放在同一句。不過用太多會變成套句,一篇最多一次。

同一個主題,換個問法也能用

「大學生該不該修主修以外的科目」(Task 4,Cam18-2)拿到 8 / 6 / 7 / 8。我在這篇用到的論點,跟實用技能、學科經費兩題幾乎可以互通:

論點Task 4 的用法可以搬到哪一題
適應職場變化learning comprehensive subjects makes it easier for students to adapt to changes in the workplace(行政工作被科技取代)實用技能題(支持方)、科技取代工作題
找到真正的興趣students can figure out whether they are interested in the main subjects they currently major in實用技能題、gap year 題
學歷是求職最有力的證明qualifications are always the strongest evidence when finding jobs大學教育題、實用技能題(反對方)
專業知識帶來升遷workers with better educational backgrounds and professional knowledge are easier to get promotions(建議改 find it easier to get promoted)換工作題、工作滿意度題

這篇的 Coherence 只有 6,我回頭看的原因是:每段的兩個理由都只有一句解釋加一個例子,例子和論點之間少了「所以這代表什麼」的收尾句,段落讀起來像清單。內容和單字其實都夠,差的是句子之間的連結。

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有些日子,明明練了很久,成績卻還停在原地。希望這篇筆記能讓你知道,備考路上遇到挫折並不孤單。一次次重聽的錄音、改過的作文、終於敢說出口的句子,都是你已經走過的路。

把這些經驗寫下來,是想陪下一個正在準備的人少繞一點路。你不必照著我的方法前進,只需要慢慢找到適合自己的節奏。累的時候可以休息,再回來做今天能完成的一小步。

願你最後帶走的,不只是成績單上的數字,還有更相信自己、敢往世界走近一點的勇氣。

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