Task 1 地圖題範文｜共 3 篇
- 1. 基本資料與 6 分醫院篇
- 2. 港口 6.5 與運動中心 7（你正在讀）
- 3. 時態對照、改寫與清單
✦ 這篇筆記帶你看
三、6.5 分（TA 6）：港口今昔
題目在考什麼
兩張平面圖比較一個港口 2000 年和現在的樣子。2000 年：西邊是南北向的主要道路，旁邊有兩個停車場和一處淋浴間＋廁所；港內北邊是遊艇碼頭（marina），南邊較大的水域停漁船；北側有碼頭，兩側停靠客運渡輪；東南方的岬角上有一座廢棄城堡，旁邊是公共海灘；中間有救生艇站，一條小路從主要道路通往救生艇站。
現在：多了一座碼頭，可停靠更多渡輪；遊艇和漁船的位置對調（漁船移到北邊、遊艇移到南邊較大的水域）；城堡改建成飯店，公共海灘變成飯店專用的私人海灘，道路延伸到飯店；救生艇站旁新增咖啡廳和商店；兩個停車場之間多了一處淋浴間＋廁所。停車場和救生艇站本身沒有變。
以下為送出批改的原始版本，未修改（錯字、文法錯誤都保留）。
The pictures compare the layouts of Porth Harbour as in 2000 and as today. Overall, the harbour has witnessed considerable changes; a number of new facilities have been built and the function of some places has changed.
In 2000, to the north part of the picture, two docks were constructed; in contrast, in terms of the south-east part, a disused castle was located next to a public beach. As for the western part, there were two car parks, one was connected by a Road while another was by the Main road, where a place for showers and toilets was built in the north. In addition, there are two spaces for fishing boats and marina, respectively, in the ocean.
Regarding today’s harbour, more passenger ferries are allowed because of an additional constructed dock. A hotel is replaced the castle, and the private is been taken by a private one that only for hotel’s guests. Besides, a new space for cafes and shops are constructed next to a lifeboat, which locates across from the ducks. Moreover, the places which previously accommodated fishing boats and marina now changes to store marina and fishing boats, respectively.
逐項對照：漏寫了哪些改變？
| 今天的改變 | 原文有沒有寫 | 說明 |
|---|---|---|
| 多一座碼頭、更多渡輪 | 有 | more passenger ferries are allowed because of an additional constructed dock |
| 城堡 → 飯店 | 有 | 但 A hotel is replaced the castle 文法錯 |
| 公共海灘 → 私人海灘 | 有，但讀不懂 | the private is been taken by a private one，意思無法辨認 |
| 救生艇站旁新增咖啡廳與商店 | 有 | 但 ducks（應為 docks）、which locates 用錯 |
| 遊艇與漁船位置對調 | 有 | 寫法繞口但內容正確 |
| 新增第二處淋浴間＋廁所 | 沒有 | 漏寫 |
| 道路延伸到飯店 | 沒有 | 漏寫 |
| 停車場、救生艇站不變 | 沒有 | 沒交代哪些沒改變 |
這篇為什麼 TA 停在 6
- Overview 有方向但沒有內容：“a number of new facilities have been built and the function of some places has changed” 這句放在任何一題地圖都成立。比醫院那篇好的地方是沒有寫錯，所以 TA 從 5 升到 6；但要到 7，Overview 必須點名最主要的改變，例如「城堡變飯店、多一座碼頭、整體更偏向觀光」。
- 漏掉兩個改變：新增的淋浴間廁所、延伸到飯店的道路都沒寫。地圖題的改變通常不多（這題大約七、八項），漏掉兩項就很明顯。
- 描述現況卻用了「建造」的動詞：2000 年那段寫 “two docks were constructed”，聽起來像 2000 年才蓋碼頭，會讓考官誤以為這是一個改變。描述某年的樣子時，用 there was / were 或 was located 就好。
LR 6、GRA 6：意思被拼字和結構吃掉
| 原文 | 問題 | 可以改成 |
|---|---|---|
| ducks | 拼錯變成「鴨子」 | docks |
| the private is been taken by a private one that only for hotel’s guests | 主詞不完整、被動式錯誤、少動詞 | the public beach has been turned into a private beach for hotel guests |
| A hotel is replaced the castle | 主動被動混在一起 | The castle has been replaced by a hotel |
| which locates across from | locate 要用被動 | which is located opposite |
| there are two spaces … (2000 年段落) | 描述過去用現在式 | there were two areas … |
| now changes to store marina and fishing boats | 時態錯、store 用法怪 | have swapped places |
四、7 分：大學運動中心改建
題目在考什麼
兩張平面圖比較大學運動中心的現況和改建後。現況：中間是室內主建築，南邊入口進去是櫃檯，西側是更衣室，中央是 25 公尺泳池，東側是觀眾席，北側是健身房；主建築的東西兩側各有一塊戶外球場。
改建後：主建築本身（櫃檯、更衣室、泳池、觀眾席、健身房）維持不變，但兩塊戶外球場都拆除，建築往東西兩側擴建。西側新增休閒泳池、一間更衣室，以及入口左邊的運動用品店；東側新增運動館、兩間舞蹈教室、一間更衣室，以及入口右邊的咖啡廳。
以下為送出批改的原始版本，未修改（錯字、文法錯誤都保留）。
The pictures illustrate the layout of University sports centre as it is today and as it’s future plans. Overall, the sports centre planned to witness dramatic changes. In the future, the room of indoor space will expand and the sports centre will cater to various peoples’ needs.
Regarding the sports centre today, an indoor stadium is in the centre, and two outdoor courts are located to the east and to the west of the indoor stadium, respectively. When we go through the stadium, there is a reception in front of guests; a changing room is on the left hand side while a seating area is on the right. A 25-meter long swimming pool is located in the centre, while a gym is sitting to the north of the pool.
In terms of the layout in the future, the indoor place will be expanded. Walking into the sports centre, a new sports shop will be constructed on the left, and a cafe will be built on the right. Besides that, in the west of the sports centre, the space which is now housing outdoor courts will accommodate a leisure pool in and a changing room. Additionally, in the east of the sports centre, the outdoor courts will be replaced by two dance studios, a sports hall, and a changing room.
這篇做對了什麼
| 評分項目 | 小分 | 做對的地方 |
|---|---|---|
| Task Achievement | 7 | 新增的設施全部寫到：運動用品店、咖啡廳、休閒泳池、兩間更衣室、運動館、兩間舞蹈教室，位置也都正確。Overview 點出「室內空間擴大」和「滿足更多需求」兩個方向。 |
| Coherence & Cohesion | 8 | 嚴格遵守「一個段落一個時間」：第二段只寫現在，第三段只寫未來。第三段再用「入口兩側 → 西側 → 東側」的空間順序帶讀者走一圈，非常好跟。 |
| Lexical Resource | 7 | expand、accommodate、be replaced by、house 等地圖題常用動詞都有用上，而且「取代」換了幾種說法。 |
| Grammatical Range & Accuracy | 7 | 未來段落一致使用 will be constructed / will be built / will accommodate，時態穩定。 |
還差什麼到 7.5／8
- Overview 缺「什麼不變」：這題很重要的一個特徵是中央主建築完全沒有改，以及戶外球場全部消失。我自己的筆記裡其實有一句必背句型：「Finally, no changes will be made to …」，這篇卻沒用上。
- 用詞不精確：indoor stadium（圖上沒有體育場）、the room of indoor space（應為 indoor space）、When we go through the stadium（Task 1 是客觀描述，不要用 we）。
- 時態和文法小錯：as it’s future plans（應為 its）、the sports centre planned to witness（未來的改變用 is planned to / will）、a gym is sitting（地點描述不用進行式）、a leisure pool in and a changing room（多了 in）、various peoples’ needs（應為 people’s）。
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